Music Magazine: Double age 4

Music Magazine: Double page spread 3

Music Magazine: Double Page 2

Music Magazine: Double Page Spread

Teacher Feddback

Music Magazine: Feedback changes and Final Contents page

Peer Feedback Response

Thank you for all your comments, I agree with quite a few of your feedback comments eg. the changing of the title and I will assess and change that as soon as possible.
Thank you for the input.

The contents page is very striking and the background makes it stand out, and also makes it look more interesting for the reader. The font is consistent and there is a good amount of images placed around the page, I think to improve you could perhaps go along with your "black and white" theme and edit the images on photo shop to make them black and white as well, everything else is good.

Peer Feedback

Elizabeth Finlay

I really like your contents page and the background fits really well with your genre. You have designed your contents page differently to others however I think this is quite effective. I love the fonts and styles that you have used as I think they fit really well to your 'quirky' genre of music. Some possible corrections: your title looks a bit like its the front cover, if I was you I would make the word 'contents' bigger than the word 'musica' because this may get a little confusing. Overall a really good contents page though! :) well done!!

Peer Feedback - Emily Devlin

Strengths:
Well set out, follows conventions well. I like the color scheme and the range of images you have used.

Areas for improvement:
The background is maybe a bit too much along with the black and white writing so maybe think about changing the color?

Other comments:
Overall really well made and obviously you have put a lot of time and effort into this task. Well done :)