Friday, 22 March 2013
Wednesday, 20 March 2013
Thursday, 28 February 2013
Tuesday, 26 February 2013
Tuesday, 19 February 2013
Peer Feedback Response
Thank you for all your comments, I agree with quite a few of your feedback comments eg. the changing of the title and I will assess and change that as soon as possible.
Thank you for the input.
Thank you for the input.
The contents page is very striking and the background makes it stand out, and also makes it look more interesting for the reader. The font is consistent and there is a good amount of images placed around the page, I think to improve you could perhaps go along with your "black and white" theme and edit the images on photo shop to make them black and white as well, everything else is good.
Peer Feedback
Elizabeth Finlay
I really like your contents page and the background fits really well with your genre. You have designed your contents page differently to others however I think this is quite effective. I love the fonts and styles that you have used as I think they fit really well to your 'quirky' genre of music. Some possible corrections: your title looks a bit like its the front cover, if I was you I would make the word 'contents' bigger than the word 'musica' because this may get a little confusing. Overall a really good contents page though! :) well done!!
I really like your contents page and the background fits really well with your genre. You have designed your contents page differently to others however I think this is quite effective. I love the fonts and styles that you have used as I think they fit really well to your 'quirky' genre of music. Some possible corrections: your title looks a bit like its the front cover, if I was you I would make the word 'contents' bigger than the word 'musica' because this may get a little confusing. Overall a really good contents page though! :) well done!!
Peer Feedback - Emily Devlin
Strengths:
Well set out, follows conventions well. I like the color scheme and the range of images you have used.
Areas for improvement:
The background is maybe a bit too much along with the black and white writing so maybe think about changing the color?
Other comments:
Overall really well made and obviously you have put a lot of time and effort into this task. Well done :)
Well set out, follows conventions well. I like the color scheme and the range of images you have used.
Areas for improvement:
The background is maybe a bit too much along with the black and white writing so maybe think about changing the color?
Other comments:
Overall really well made and obviously you have put a lot of time and effort into this task. Well done :)
Friday, 25 January 2013
Thursday, 24 January 2013
Tuesday, 8 January 2013
Peer Feedback: the verdict
I thank all who have analysed my work and your feedback will help me greatly, in particular those concerning the front cover, the fact that some of you thought my cover was a little cluttered and that my masthead needs some work will help me in the future.
The critisism will help my other drafts later on in productions so thanks again :D
The critisism will help my other drafts later on in productions so thanks again :D
Peer feedback: Oliver Wright
Overall i like your blog because there are a lot of post on it which shows that you have put a lot of time and thought into it.
The images on your front cover make the front cover look better because they maker the cover look like a real magazine that you might see in a shop. I think that there is a bit too much writing on the cover though so i think you should try to sum up all of the stories into concise sentences/ short paragraphs.
The images on your front cover make the front cover look better because they maker the cover look like a real magazine that you might see in a shop. I think that there is a bit too much writing on the cover though so i think you should try to sum up all of the stories into concise sentences/ short paragraphs.
Peer Feedback (Jeff Agenor)
Overall impression:
Well I must say James that I am impressed. I can see that you've been using your time wisely to complete as much as you can; that's good, keep it up! And looking at the pictures of 'Chev' hahah I must say that they're really funny and creative because I could remember when you were taking them.
Strengths of F/C:
Your front cover is very good and I'm not going to be hard on you at all considering that you're still getting in grips with Photoshop. You've done exactly what you're supposed to do by following the conventions and putting things in the correct order.
Areas for improvement:
Well there's always room for improvement. Improvement can never be too much, What I would suggest you do is try putting up some more. Like your demographics research, market research; make refinements and mention new things that you perhaps learnt about over the holidays. Other than that you're good man!
Well I must say James that I am impressed. I can see that you've been using your time wisely to complete as much as you can; that's good, keep it up! And looking at the pictures of 'Chev' hahah I must say that they're really funny and creative because I could remember when you were taking them.
Strengths of F/C:
Your front cover is very good and I'm not going to be hard on you at all considering that you're still getting in grips with Photoshop. You've done exactly what you're supposed to do by following the conventions and putting things in the correct order.
Areas for improvement:
Well there's always room for improvement. Improvement can never be too much, What I would suggest you do is try putting up some more. Like your demographics research, market research; make refinements and mention new things that you perhaps learnt about over the holidays. Other than that you're good man!
Peer feedback
Sophie Griffiths
This is an overall good blog, you have put a lot of time in-to it to create your final product as a whole. There are plenty of images used which you has meant you have had plenty of time to choose and decide upon your final image.
The strenghts of this final front cover are really good, there isn't many faults to critice upon, although i would say your mast-head needs to be a bit clearer as i found it hard to understand what it said. But on the other hand your drafts for your work are really good, so there's not much to worry about :)
This is an overall good blog, you have put a lot of time in-to it to create your final product as a whole. There are plenty of images used which you has meant you have had plenty of time to choose and decide upon your final image.
The strenghts of this final front cover are really good, there isn't many faults to critice upon, although i would say your mast-head needs to be a bit clearer as i found it hard to understand what it said. But on the other hand your drafts for your work are really good, so there's not much to worry about :)
peer feedback
Thomas Powers
The front cover is well detailed and it looks like you have spent a lot of time working on the front cover. your blog is well thought out and you have positioned things well.
the only things bad with your front cover is there is too much writing on the bottom of the front cover, this and some of the things look a little bit crowded
The front cover is well detailed and it looks like you have spent a lot of time working on the front cover. your blog is well thought out and you have positioned things well.
the only things bad with your front cover is there is too much writing on the bottom of the front cover, this and some of the things look a little bit crowded
Peer Feedback
Louise Hudson
Overall, I feel the sheer amount of detail in these drafts really outrule any bits constructive criticism I can give.
This is rather hypocritical as I have done this but I feel an area of development should be more differenciation between each draft. You've used a similar tactic to me by taking the time to create a great first draft and then change the other drafts ever so slightly. I've acknowledged this with my work too and I may need to make changes like this too.
Listen to the other feedback and you won't really have to take anything I say into consideration as all of your drafts are very strong.
Well Done! :)
Overall, I feel the sheer amount of detail in these drafts really outrule any bits constructive criticism I can give.
This is rather hypocritical as I have done this but I feel an area of development should be more differenciation between each draft. You've used a similar tactic to me by taking the time to create a great first draft and then change the other drafts ever so slightly. I've acknowledged this with my work too and I may need to make changes like this too.
Listen to the other feedback and you won't really have to take anything I say into consideration as all of your drafts are very strong.
Well Done! :)
Peer Feedback
Charlotte Medhurst
Overall its a really good blog with a lot of detailed work. It looks like youve put a a lot of time into it and the work seems to be done well.
The front cover has an eye catching title and the layout works well.
I also really like the picture, especially the effects youve done on her hair, it looks really good and draws attention.
Its a very impressive front cover, the only criticism would be that I think theres a bit too much writing on the bottom left of the cover.
Overall its a really good blog with a lot of detailed work. It looks like youve put a a lot of time into it and the work seems to be done well.
The front cover has an eye catching title and the layout works well.
I also really like the picture, especially the effects youve done on her hair, it looks really good and draws attention.
Its a very impressive front cover, the only criticism would be that I think theres a bit too much writing on the bottom left of the cover.
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