Tuesday, 8 January 2013

Peer feedback: Oliver Wright

Overall i like your blog because there are a lot of post on it which shows that you have put a lot of time and thought into  it.
          The images on your front cover make the front cover look better because they maker the cover look like a real magazine that you might see in a shop. I think that there is a bit too much writing on the cover though so i think you should try to sum up all of the stories into concise sentences/ short paragraphs.

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