Louise Hudson
Overall, I feel the sheer amount of detail in these drafts really outrule any bits constructive criticism I can give.
This is rather hypocritical as I have done this but I feel an area of development should be more differenciation between each draft. You've used a similar tactic to me by taking the time to create a great first draft and then change the other drafts ever so slightly. I've acknowledged this with my work too and I may need to make changes like this too.
Listen to the other feedback and you won't really have to take anything I say into consideration as all of your drafts are very strong.
Well Done! :)
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